I wonder if I put a few words here?

Category: Assignment 2 – Blog Feedback

comment for Justine

Hello Justine,

Thanks for showing this fabulous sketchnote. It is very straightforward to understand these service steps, even though I haven never known the detail of serving.

As for your concern of dealing with the redundancy principle. I have the same problem as you. However, I have a few steps that might help you improve your redundancy principle. When listening audio, trying to catch main texts from the speaker, and write down the time when this text appears, so that you can review thhis infomation by this specific time.

For example, when I was listening to the Soundcloud about Multimedia Learning, I heard the information of “….base on retention” and “how it is measured?”. Then I wrote down “How it is measured? based on retention.” The point is you don’t need to care about grammar when taking notes. All we need to do is learn knowledge as efficiently as possible.

Angel

Blog Post #3: Comments for Chuhesong

Hi Chuhesong,

Your description of segmenting principle is very creative. You illustrate the knowledge we have received as a big bomb, which I agree with you.

Besides, have you ever thought about reorganizing bite-sized information into more than one form? For example, you create an instructional video of how to cut a sphere. And you define four steps of cutting a sphere:

  1. put out a knife
  2. draw the center line on the sphere
  3. cut the sphere through the center line
  4. cut the rest of the sphere into the shape of whatever you like

You would find these steps are not straightforward after a few days. Then you can define the instruction of cutting a sphere into other instructions such as how to cut a sphere into stars; how to cut a sphere into squares, etc.

That’s all my assumptions. Hope you could enjoy them.

Angel

blog post#2: comments to my group members

For Amelia

Hi Amelia. I’m glad to hear you enjoy creating sketchnotes during your class! And I agree with you of pointing out the main information with images while make sketchnotes after I have read your sketchnote from your post. Besides, your organizion of texts and drawings is pretty clear.

Week 1 blog feedback for Celia

Hi Celia,

Your comment about applying interactive communication to marketing is very brilliant. According to your blog, you have mentioned adequate marketing communication information in subway stations while mentioning a few information about digital marketing.


However, I suggest you provide further information on subway advertisements. For example, you could explain why digital advertisements are more effective than traditional advertisements.

Besides, I just discovered my example of the McDonald temperature-sensitive panel has slight similarities fit to your blog theme. This panel that I have mentioned on my blog seems like a marketing strategy by McDonald’s company.

I wonder if you can insert a link to a specific phrase (example above) in your future blogs, so that readers would receive information more effectively.

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